GOOD DEED..

This is a story about Harris,who is my bosom friend.He is very frank hearted and also an industrious teenager.He lives in an enormous and pretty gorgeous bungalow house with his beloved family at Taman Victory.He studies at St. Victory High which is a stone's throw away from his bungalow house.Being an intelligent student in his school, he is well-liked by all the teachers and students.

Harris frequently wakes up early in the morning as he believes an early bird catches more worms.He loves to eat fruits as an apple a day keeps a doctor away.He likes to assist anyone who is in hot water.

Last summer vacation, Harris and his immediate friends, Hamid and Hafiz decided to have a small picnic by the well-known waterfall, Jeram Linang at Kuala Lipis.Before going there, Harris took along with him necessities such as scrumptious canned food, attractive mat, swimsuit and also camera.They ride their brand new bikes properly while chatted and giggled happily during their exciting journey.

At 9.30 o'clock in the morning, Harris and his friends reached Jeram Linang safely.Quickly, they searched for a comfortable spot to put out their necessities.Lastly, they choosed to put their necessities under the big shady tree near the cool clear crystal waterfall.Then, they swam in the cool clear crystal water and played a round colourful ball happily.After an hour swam, they prepared for their early lunch on the attractive mat.They ate scrumptious canned food hungrily and greedily as they were really tired.Then, they asked some foreign tourist to take a few pictures of them as memories.

Suddenly,Harris heard someone was shouting loudly for help behind.He looked behind him and at the corner of his hazel eyes, he could saw a little cute girl was drowning.He was very shocked.Without hesitation ,he dived towards the girl hurriedly.He grabbed her hand and pulled her into the river bank.The girl unconscious but lastly she was safe.Harris called the girl's parents and told them everything about the incident.He hoped they can come as quick as possible.

After a few minutes later, the parents of the cute little girl came and they were really thankful to Harris for being such a helpful boy and saved their daughter's life.They also grateful to The Creator.They gave Harris 50 dollar but he refused to accept it.It was really a memorable and unforgettable day form him.

h0la =)
dis is my essay when im in standard 6
i n0e there's 2 many grammar mistake !
d0 h0pe dat u all can c0rrect it =)